Believe That Lie
Young eyes waited to grow up
Change the world;
Make it alright
But, is it true?
That a brother kills a brother
A mother cries for her daughter
That innocence lost,
Meant turning against each other?
That friendships ruined
Meant despising the other?
Growing up sounded
So much fun,
Among blushy giggles
And careless puns.
But, is it true?
In the gardens we jump about
Lay silent witness to
Promises broken and words unspoken;
Is it true?
That love fades?
That under Ray-ban shades
Are tears un-shed.
Then I'd much rather stay a child,
Bedtime stories and happy families on a ride,
Even if a disguise,
I'd much rather
Believe that lie!
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This is a amazing one.
ReplyDeleteReality Described beautifully...
great choice of words...
Thank You Mehul! although i don't value myself as much of a poet. This was my first poem ever way back! Couldn't help but post it as my first blog :)
Deletebrilliant!!
ReplyDeleteThank You! but coming from you, i know you'll only have good things to say :)
DeleteGood way of expressing the thoughts. It's nice!
ReplyDeleteThank You Ansho :)Good to know that you connect! :)
DeleteMaster stroke!! I never know you understand life so deeply..and if this was your first work...no need to guess your improvement..:)
ReplyDeleteI was a bit hesitant to post this one, because this was rather personal; being my first poem that is, but your words have been rather encouraging. SO, thank you!
DeletePOTENTIAL won't turn into TALENT unless it is encouraged!
DeleteMy pleasure..:)
I loved it !!!!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Abhigna! That's very kind of you to say! :)
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